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lionheart007
06-19-2007, 08:19 PM
pointers on improving my page? Thanks!? www.gregoryparry.com

rln912
06-20-2007, 12:52 AM
This is a pretty nice web site, not much to improve, but under your picture on the index(homepage) there are some red squares which i believe is caused by html when you tell it to skip a line. this also happens when the gray color all the way down the page. I would experiment with differnet colors besides... faded red for the top picture and navigation bar... blue is popular and looks very profesional. Last you take people off of your page on the view all of our listings page, instead make it an external link that pops a new window or tab. That way they can navigate through the listings and still be on your page giving you more of a chance they come back to your home page.

godged
06-20-2007, 04:02 AM
First problem, I went through 4 pages of a Google for Gregory Parry and did not find this site. Your webmaster needs to improve your metatags.

Next, it is fairly bland, black, red, white. If you are trying to emphasize that your business recognition is with the red color, OK, but it is a bit loud. Red text, red across the header, red down the sides, it just is too much red.

Could you place your picture next to your sign so it doesn't look so stretched out on the main page?

I have to click on another link to learn about your services? How about just laying out the information?

I agree that the site needs to be softened a bit. Most of the text is in caps, it sort of runs together rather than be thoughtfully placed on the page. Changing font colors amongst the information or placing some sort of text box or bullet points to separate it.

And if you can stand one more suggestion, how about a page with information or links about your area? I found the page with attractions, famous people and schools, but how about city, county or state links? Employment opportunities? Local amenities such as shopping, restaurants, etc., etc. (Maybe some people would pay to have their links on your website?)

Good luck!